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The Eidolon Initiative: Chapter Two, Page Twenty-One
So, is this another jump forward in time, or was the Kat Carter bathroom bit set just under eight months prior to the Purity of Essence bit?
We are jumping back and forth in time–only a week or two has passed in each timeline.
So, maybe it would be an idea to prefix Kat Carter segments with “Eight Months ago…” and Monsters of Science segments with “Now…” or “The Present”? The way you’ve currently got it, it is a bit ambiguous.
Fair. I did try to have in-story markers of about how much time has passed to make things a little clearer.