Script for today:
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 View of Edith, the upper half of her. She has now risen out of her chair, having put the dossier open on the table, pinned under Edith’s splayed fingers. EDITH: Is that what you call having “ethics standards,” Admiral?  | 
 View of Shackleford, still standing at this end of the table, but beginning to fall back. His mouth is hanging open. SHACKLEFORD (broken-line balloon): …  | 
 View of Shackleford again, this time having sunk back into his chair. He is covering his eyes with one hand. SHACKLEFORD: What do you think, Chen.  | 
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 View of Chen, sitting in his chair. He is in the act of scratching his chin thoughtfully. CHEN: Well, the technical side of Professor Sterling’s proposal checks out…and from an ethical side I think she makes a serious point about doing something for the girls…  | 
 Another view of Chen, his face drawn into an insincere, tight-lipped smile. He is pointing into the air. CHEN: You could always point out to the brass that the biochemical pathway data would be most useful for our BioEnhanced Soldier project.  | 
 View of Shackleford again, leaning forward on the table, his hands steepled, his brow knit in concentration. SHACKLEFORD: Hmm…  | 
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 Night in Edith’s hotel room. She is wearing only an oversize GNOSIS COLLEGE sweatshirt. She has drawn the curtain to her window. She is holding a half-full wineglass and is standing, staring out the window, apparently lost in thought. CAPTION (Edith thinking): Always agreeable to get official approval for your own suicide run.  | 
 A view out the window. We see a cityscape by night. CAPTION (Upper left, Edith thinking): I guess eyes lit up back at headquarters when they heard about the possibility of a new technology they could weaponize. CAPTION (lower right, Edith thinking): I did of course emphasize there are families out there missing their daughters… CAPTION (still lower right, Edith thinking): Guess I’d better try to get some sleep. There’s a lot of work ahead.  | 
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 Long view across the factory floor. There are a lot of white-coated technicians scattered around, and a lot more medical looking machinery. A small figure of Edith, in a white labcoat, stands in the middle of the panel and is pointing at something, as if giving directions. CAPTION (Edith thinking): The promise of getting guns brings out a lot of money, a lot of equipment, and a lot of personnel.  | 
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 Edith standing at a lab bench, wearing dark goggles and heavy gloves. She is holding a flask with long tongs which contains a glowing liquid. CAPTION (Edith thinking): Figuring out Dr. Sin’s protocols good enough to recreate isn’t that hard.  | 
 Edith looking down at a computer screen, her face illuminated. CAPTION (Edith thinking): After all, he did make videos of his crimes.  | 
 Two technicians are working on something that looks like a large satellite dish. CAPTION (Edith thinking): Capturing the data is trickier, but I have plenty of help for that.  | 
Okay, sort of a bit of dull, bureaucratic script today. I guess even mad scientists sometimes have to fill out paperwork and go to boring meetings (maybe that’s one reason why they’re so mad). I’ll try to liven things up a bit with a thematically appropriate sirene, which I believe is the work of Max Klinger (1857-1920).
		