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Баррон-младший, похоже, тайно наслаждался тем, что случилось с его сестрой.

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PAGE 23 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Barron Sr. putting his hand on the barrel of an assault rifle that Wealth Friend is pointing at the sea, a gesture meant to stop him from shooting into the water.

Barron Sr. (1): No, you idiot.

Translation (1): Нет, идиот.

Panel 2: A view into the boat, showing the now-charred corpses of Yacht Crewman #1 and Yacht Crewman #2.

Panel 3: A view of Peony, now standing some distance away on deck, her head buried in her hands in shock and grief.

Peony (2): No…

Translation (2): Нет…

Panel 4: A view downward, indicating that Barron Jr. is pointing his camera down but is still filming. (Note that he is about 11 years old at this time.) We see the swimming trunks he’s wearing, his legs and feet and beneath them the planking of the deck. We can also see through the fabric of his swimming trunks that he is having a marked erection.


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Pulled in by the tentacle monster.

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INT. THE MAIN WAREHOUSE SPACE – NIGHT


Rosalie reaches down and then begins to undo her skirt.


The Gynophage reaches out with a “grabber” tentacle, take each of Rosalie’s upper arms gently to pull Rosalie in closer.


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Последний вздох Фиби.

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PAGE 22 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Yacht Crewman #1 and Yacht Crewman #2 in the boat by the side of the Yellow Rose, as if viewed through Barron Jr.’s camera. Yacht Crewman #1 has a harpoon raised and aimed, presumably at the tentacle beast. One small tentacle is reaching over the side of the boat. Yacht Crewman #2 is sitting in the back of the boat steering an outboard motor.

Yacht Crewman #1 (1): I’ll get you, you motherfucker!

Translation (1): Я тебя поймаю, тварь!

Panel 2: Yacht Crewman #1 and Yacht Crewman #2 appear as blackened silhouettes as some sort of massive electrical discharge hits their boat. The whole craft is surrounded by a flash as if of lightning.

SFX – BOAT AND CREW BEING ELECTRO-FRIED (2): KZZZ-ZOT!

Translation (2): ТШШШШ!

Panel 3: Phoebe’s head resurfaces just a bit. A tentacle covers a triangular region around her mother and nose, rather like a medical breathing mask. Her eyes are closed, and her expression looks almost blissful.

Panel 4: Ripples in the region of water where Phoebe’s head has been pulled underneath for one last time.


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Rosalie disrobed by the tentacle monster.

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INT. THE MAIN WAREHOUSE SPACE – NIGHT


Rosalie’s blouse falls to the floor on her labcoat. She then begins to undo her brassiere. When it is off, a mouth tentacle attaches to one of her breasts and then begins moving with a sucking motion.


Rosalie GASPS and then MOANS softly.


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Фиби подвергается сексуальному насилию.

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PAGE 21 (Single panel page)

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Single panel: View into the water. We see Phoebe underwater, naked and surrounded by a roiling mass of tentacles, some of which appear to be penetrating all of her primary orifices. “Voices” can be heard suggesting the chaos on the Yellow Rose.

CAPTIONS AT VARIOUS POINTS AROUND THE PANEL (1): “Oh God, oh God!””Kill that thing!””Get it!””Yes, Mr. Petrobux!””I’m getting my gun!”

Translation (1): «Боже, Боже мой!» «Убейте эту тварь» «Есть!» «Да, мистер Петробакс!» «Беру ружье!»


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Rosalie slips the labcoat, getting the creature's attention.

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INT. THE MAIN WAREHOUSE SPACE – NIGHT


Rosalie walks toward the creature, stops a few yards short of the reach of its tentacles, and looks around apprehensively.


SAM OUT COLD


Sam has head down on the security console. The cup of coffee is turned on its side, its dregs spilled out. Sam SNORES gently.


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Rosalie steps forward to just within the reach of the tentacles. A number of tentacles extend and hover near her, some of them eyes watching. Rosalie steps out of her shoes and puts them aside.


She shrugs off her labcoat and lets it fall to the floor. Then she begins to unbutton her blouse. Some tentacles advance closer.


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Паника на яхте!

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PAGE 20 (Single panel page)

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Single panel: Wide “shot” showing a certain amount of pandemonium on deck. Barron Sr. and Peony are leaning over the rail, looking horrified at what they see in the water. A little further on, YACHT CREWMAN #1, an African-American man and YACHT CREWMAN #2, a Latino man, both neatly attired in pseudo-naval uniforms, are lowering themselves in a boat over the side as part of a rescue attempt.

Peony (1): My baby! My baby!

Translation (1): Девочка моя!

Barron Sr. (2): God dammit!

Translation (2): Черт возьми!


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Nothing like some coffee to put the security guard to sleep.

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INT. SECURITY ROOM – A LITTLE LATER


Rosalie hands the coffee to Sam.


SAM


Thanks, Dr. Quisp.


(takes a small sip)


Say, I hear they’re shutting us down.


ROSALIE


I’m afraid so, Sam. Monday the creature goes to the government.


SAM


Can’t say I’ll miss it much.


(looks at monitor on which the Gynophage appears)


Just between you and me it kinda gives me the creeps.


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Чудовище раздевает Фиби догола.

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PAGE 19 (Four panels)

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Panel 1: Another, smaller column of water on the surface of the sea as Phoebe is jerked back underwater.

SFX – SUBMERGING (1): Fwoosh!

Translation (1): Пшшш!

Panel 2: A tentacle has emerged above the same surface of the water as in Panel 1. It is swinging around Phoebe’s bikini top, which the beast below has presumable stripped off her. (Indicate with motion lines.)

Panel 3: A spot on the deck of the Yellow Rose, close-up. Phoebe’s bikini top landing on the deck, presumably tossed there by the beast below.

SFX – WET BIKINI TOP LANDING ON DECK (2): Splut!

Translation (2): Плюх!

Panel 4: Same as Panel 2, but now it’s the bikini bottom landing next to the top.

SFX – WET BIKINI BOTTOM LANDING (3): Plop!

Translation (3): Шлеп!


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Doctoring the coffee,

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INT. SECURITY ROOM – NIGHT


SAM, a burly uniformed security guard with a gun strapped to his waist, sits at a console full of video monitors. He is reading a men’s magazine. A clock in the background reads a little after two.


There is a KNOCK on a door behind him.


SAM


Come on in, Dr. Quisp.


Dr. Quisp steps in.


ROSALIE


How’d you know it was me, Sam?


SAM


(gestures at his monitors)


I am Samuel the all-seeing. And what can I do for you this fine early morning, ma’am?


ROSALIE


I was going to put on another pot of coffee, was wondering if you wanted a cup.


SAM


Well, thank you, Dr. Quisp. I certainly would.


ROSALIE


Black with two sugars, right?


SHOT – COFFEE


In another room, Rosalie pours a cup of coffee, adds lumps of sugar, then something out of small medicine bottle with an eyedropper, then stirs.


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