We Must Boost the Signal, Page 04

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Bad old tentacles will appear..

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PAGE 4 (Four panels)

Panel One: A view underwater. We see part of Amy’s lower half, her legs kicking through the water as she swims. Something resembling a nearly-transparent tentacle is snaking through the water toward one of her ankles, just about to touch it.

Panel Two: Amy’s head and shoulders above the water — she is as if treating water at this point. Her face registers surprise and a little shock.

Panel Three: A column of water jetting up from the surface of the lake, thrown up by displacement as Amy has been pulled suddenly and violently under.

Panel Four: Amy underwater. She is positioned straight up. This panel depicts an event at about the same time as Panel Three, so there should be a trail of bubbles above Amy’s head where she has been pulled under. Her face should be scrunched up, as water has just jetted up her nose.

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We Must Boost the Signal, Page 03

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The water's fine...

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PAGE 3 (Four panels)

Panel One: Amy diving off the dock into the lake.

Panel Two: A splash in the surface of the lakewater (SFX: plash!) as Amy dives in. Her face is made up in a big smile.

Panel Three: Amy’s head breaking back through the surface of the water as she re-emerges.

Caption: The water is unusually warm this morning…

Panel Four: Amy breast-stroking through the water.

Caption: All’s right with the world.

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We Must Boost the Signal, Page 02

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What a glorious sunrise, what a beautiful lake!

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PAGE 2 (Single panel, splash page)

Single Panel: Long view, Amy stepping out onto a wooden dock in her swimsuit. The dock extends out into a still lake the lies in a green woods on a gorgeous summer morning, with the sun coming up.

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We Must Boost the Signal, Page 01

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We're all happy she's getting a little big in there.

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PAGE 1 (Four panels)

Panel One: AMY NINENGER (“AMY”) is inside a vacation cabin, sitting up on a bunk in a nightgown, stretching as if she has just woken up.

Character design note: Amy is an all-American girl, perhaps seventeen years old, slender, strawberry-blonde, tanned (with tan lines made by her swimsuit as described in Panel Three below) and very pretty.

Caption: I love getting up before everyone else.

Panel Two: Amy standing on the floor, lifting her nightgown over her head. We see her bare legs and panties.

Caption: Everything is so peaceful and quiet, and I have the world to myself.

Panel Three: Amy bending over, stepping into a one-piece swimsuit. The swimsuit should be distinctive enough in appearance so that readers can make a clear visual connection to it later, so make it yellow with purple polka-dots.

Caption: I can get out for a swim on a beautiful summer morning.

Panel Four: Close up on Amy’s chest. She is cupping her hands under her breasts.

Caption: Huh. Getting a little big here.

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We Must Boost the Signal, Page 01 written and commissioned by Dr. Faustus of EroticMadScience.com and drawn by Lon Ryden is published under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivs 3.0 Unported License.)