We Must Boost the Signal, Page 05

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We Must Boost the Signal, Page 05

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PAGE 5 (Four panels)

Panel One: View of Amy’s lower half. Her legs are tangled in a roil of semi-transparent tentacles. They are struggling (indicate with motion lines) but not successfully.

Caption: No!

Panel Two: A view of Amy’s face underwater. The semi-transparent tentacles are beginning to wrap around her face. Amy’s eyes are squeezed shut and her face registers fear.

Caption: Please…

Panel Three: Amy underwater, now encased in a column of transparent goo. Her eyes are still closed. Patches of her exposed skin appear to be peeling off. Amy’s eyes are still closed. Her hands are folded across her chest.

Caption: Oh God, what’s happening to me?

Panel Four: View of the surface of the lake at the point where Amy had been pulled under a few seconds before. A few bubbles break the surface of the water.

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We Must Boost the Signal, Page 01 written and commissioned by Dr. Faustus of EroticMadScience.com and drawn by Lon Ryden is published under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivs 3.0 Unported License.)

We Must Boost the Signal, Page 04

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Bad old tentacles will appear..

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PAGE 4 (Four panels)

Panel One: A view underwater. We see part of Amy’s lower half, her legs kicking through the water as she swims. Something resembling a nearly-transparent tentacle is snaking through the water toward one of her ankles, just about to touch it.

Panel Two: Amy’s head and shoulders above the water — she is as if treating water at this point. Her face registers surprise and a little shock.

Panel Three: A column of water jetting up from the surface of the lake, thrown up by displacement as Amy has been pulled suddenly and violently under.

Panel Four: Amy underwater. She is positioned straight up. This panel depicts an event at about the same time as Panel Three, so there should be a trail of bubbles above Amy’s head where she has been pulled under. Her face should be scrunched up, as water has just jetted up her nose.

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We Must Boost the Signal, Page 04 written and commissioned by Dr. Faustus of EroticMadScience.com and drawn by Lon Ryden is published under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivs 3.0 Unported License.)

We Must Boost the Signal, Page 03

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The water's fine...

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PAGE 3 (Four panels)

Panel One: Amy diving off the dock into the lake.

Panel Two: A splash in the surface of the lakewater (SFX: plash!) as Amy dives in. Her face is made up in a big smile.

Panel Three: Amy’s head breaking back through the surface of the water as she re-emerges.

Caption: The water is unusually warm this morning…

Panel Four: Amy breast-stroking through the water.

Caption: All’s right with the world.

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We Must Boost the Signal, Page 03 written and commissioned by Dr. Faustus of EroticMadScience.com and drawn by Lon Ryden is published under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivs 3.0 Unported License.)