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PAGE 19 (Four panels)
(Note: footage)
Panel 1: Another, smaller column of water on the surface of the sea as Phoebe is jerked back underwater.
SFX – SUBMERGING (1): Fwoosh!
Translation (1): ¡Foosh!
Panel 2: A tentacle has emerged above the same surface of the water as in Panel 1. It is swinging around Phoebe’s bikini top, which the beast below has presumable stripped off her. (Indicate with motion lines.)
Panel 3: A spot on the deck of the Yellow Rose, close-up. Phoebe’s bikini top landing on the deck, presumably tossed there by the beast below.
SFX – WET BIKINI TOP LANDING ON DECK (2): Splut!
Translation (2): ¡Plic!
Panel 4: Same as Panel 2, but now it’s the bikini bottom landing next to the top.
SFX – WET BIKINI BOTTOM LANDING (3): Plop!
Translation (3): ¡Plop!
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Got to admit while this is the 3rd or 4th time I’ve seen this that I really enjoy being able to read the script along with each page.
And those sound effects of her bathing suit splatting on the deck… Really does a lot in presenting her new status so to speak.
I’m so pleased that someone appreciates this.