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She prepares to be eaten.

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INT. THE MAIN WAREHOUSE SPACE – NIGHT


The Sacrifice turns and faces the Gynophage. She then unzips the front of her catsuit and steps out of it nude. She steps forward toward the Gynophage.


As soon as the Sacrifice is within tentacle range two “grabber” tentacles seize her and yank her towards the Gynophage. The Sacrifice GASPS as this happens.


Fred focuses intently on his electronics, fiddling with knobs, peering at screens, etc. The Sacrifice MOANS.


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Приманка 049

Красивый последний жест.

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PAGE 49 (Single panel page – do in color)

Single panel: Eliza, in full pin-up mode, sits naked on the railing facing out to sea. She’s turned her head around and is smiling and waving at the men.

CAPTION – PSEUDO-NARRATION (1): There doesn’t seem to be much hesitation in this moment of truth.

Translation (1): Наступает момент истины – нет места колебаньям!

SFX – STILL MORE MALE VOCAL EXCITEMENT (2): Cheers, whistles, and applause.

Translation (2): Возгласы, свист и аплодисменты.


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You who are about to die, we salute.

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INT. THE MAIN WAREHOUSE SPACE – NIGHT


Terrorists #3 – #5 return.


Fred moves to a position well outside of of tentacle range of the Gynophage and unslings his backpack, He unpacks a variety of complex-looking electronic equipment, with which he proceeds to do various operations stuff.


The Sacrifice steps to just outside tentacle range. The four terrorists form a militarily-precise line, standing shoulder to shoulder. The Sacrifice looks at the line of terrorists and nods.


The terrorists make a crisp weapons salute directed at the Sacrifice, then they disburse to four compass points around the Gynophage and wait, facing out in kneeling position, their weapons at ready position.


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Приманка 048

Элиза демонстрирует великолепный стриптиз.

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PAGE 48 (Four panels)

Panel 1: View down the deck. A bunch of men, sailors and science guys, are lined up a few feet from the rail, leaving a path between themselves and the rail for Eliza to walk along. Eliza is emerging up onto deck from a gangway to below decks, just coming into view in the panel.

Panel 2: Same view as in Panel 1, Eliza walking down the deck toward the viewer of the panel, past the lined-up men, still a bit distant from the P.O.V. of the viewer.

Panel 3: Eliza, a bit closer to thew viewer of the Panel, in the act of lifting off her cotton shirt (which, at the discretion of the artist, can read GNOSIS COLLEGE), exposing her breasts. This elicits a reaction of mounting excitement from the men lined up. The lifting-off of Eliza’s shirt shows that she wasn’t wearing any bra.

SFX – EXCITEMENT AMONG THE CREW (1): …murmuring…

Translation (1): …бормотание…

Panel 4: Eliza, now quite close to the viewer of the panel, in the act of whipping off her skirt, which reveals that she wasn’t wearing any panties either. The men around her are reacting quite excited by now.

SFX – MORE MALE VOCAL EXCITEMENT (2): OH YEAH OH YEAH BABY OH AWESOME OH YEAH!

Translation (2): О ДА О ДА БЭБИ ПРЕКРАСНО О ДА!


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The SACRIFICE makes her first appearance.

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INT. THE MAIN WAREHOUSE SPACE – NIGHT


Terrorist #2 makes a “go” gesture with his right hand. Terrorists #3 -#5 run off leaving Terrorist #2, who takes his radio off his belt.


The Gynophage’s tentacles begin to stir more actively. Terrorist #2 regards it a bit apprehensively while every few seconds verbal reports — all in the same unintelligible foreign language — come through on his radio.


After a final such report, Terrorist #2 speaks briefly in the same unknown language into his radio.


Fred enters the main warehouse space, escorting the SACRIFICE. The Sacrifice is an attractive young woman who wears a catsuit-like garment with a zipper down its front.


Fred is wearing a heavy-looking pack.


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Это судьбоносное событие, и Элиза твердо решила не упустить свой шанс.

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PAGE 47 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Eliza, in her typical shirt and skirt getup, being interviewed in a cabin aboard the ship.

Eliza (1): Will I really go through with it? Of course I’m going through with it!

Translation (1): Вправду ли я пройду через это? Конечно, да, пройду!

Panel 2: Eliza in another part of the ship, lifting a glass of water to her lips, presumably to help her down the capsule which Hiram, who is standing off to the side and leering slightly, has just given to her.

CAPTION – ELIZA NARRATING (2): This is the ride of a lifetime. I’m not giving up that chance.

Translation (2): Это кульминация всей моей жизни. Я не упущу этот шанс.

Panel 3: Eliza getting an injection from Professor Turpentine.

CAPTION – ELIZA NARRATING (3): I get to be the first woman to tell the world what this experience feels like.

Translation (3): Я стану первой женщиной, которая расскажет об этом миру.

Panel 4: Eliza and Claudia walking down a narrow ship’s corridor. Claudia is explaining something to Eliza.

Claudia (4): Use your inner voice when you’re under, just like we practiced in the tank. The recording drones will be with you, but not too near.

Translation (4): Используй свой внутренний голос, когда будешь под водой – так, как мы отрабатывали в резервуаре. Записывающие роботы будут с тобой, но не слишком близко.

Eliza (5): Got it.

Translation (5): Понятно.


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Luckless security guards gunned down.

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INT. THE MAIN WAREHOUSE SPACE – NIGHT


Larry and Maurice are cut down in a hail of automatic gunfire from the terrorists.


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Судьба выбирает Элизу.

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PAGE 46 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Turpentine has lifted away his right hand and is now looking down at the back of his left, where the coin is now resting.

Panel 2: Eliza and Daphne sitting next to one another, both wide-eyed in anticipation.

Panel 3: Extreme close-up of the coin resting on the back of Turpentine’s hand. It is Lady Liberty-side up.

CAPTION – TURPENTINE SPEAKING (1): It’s Lady Liberty.

Translation (1): Статуя Свободы!

CAPTION – TURPENTINE SPEAKING (2): It’s Eliza.

Translation (2): Элиза.

Panel 4: Daphne and Eliza leaning over, giving each other a hug.

Daphne (3): Congratulations!

Translation (3): Поздравляю!

Eliza (4): Thank you!

Translation (4): Спасибо!


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INT. THE MAIN WAREHOUSE SPACE – NIGHT


An interior door to the main space bursts open. Two more security guards, LARRY and MAURICE, charge through the door, their pistols drawn.


LARRY


(shouting)


Freeze motherf….


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Подвесной флип монеты.

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PAGE 45 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Extreme close-up: view of the front of a 1907 Saint Gaudens double eagle held between Turpentine’s thumb and forefinger. (views of the front and reverse of this famous coin can be found at) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Double_eagle#/media/File:NNC-US-1907-G$20-Saint_Gaudens_(Roman,_high_relief).jpg (Accessed March 6, 2017)

CAPTION – TURPENTINE NARRATING (1): If Lady Liberty comes up, then Eliza will be our first subject.

Translation (1): Если выпадет статуя Свободы, первой будет Элиза.

Panel 2: Extreme close-up: view of the back of the same coin shown between Turpentine’s thumb and forefinger.

CAPTION – TURPENTINE NARRATING (2): If the eagle comes up, then Daphne will go first, and Eliza will be her backup.

Translation (2): Если выпадет орел, первой пойдет Дафна, а Элиза будет запасным.

Panel 3: Turpentine, having flipped the coin, which can be seen in mid-air just past its arc, in mid turn as it spins (indicate with motion lines.

Panel 4: Turpentine, having caught the coin in his right hand and brought it down on the back of his left (also indicate with motion lines, and an action word, designated below:!)

ACTION WORD (Turpentine’s catching coin) (3): Catch!

Translation (3): Хлоп!


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