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Прощай, Элиза.

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PAGE 54 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Closer-up view of Eliza. Almost all the tentacles are gone from her now, leaving just her being sucked still further into the feeding siphon. Her breasts are pushed up, compressed by the comparative narrowness of the siphon.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICTING RECOVERED SPEECH (1): …I love it zzt love it…pop…I love it…fwwwt…

Translation (1): …Как хорошо тшш как хорошо…щелк…как хорошо…фвввт…

SUBTITLE (2): Magnified and enhanced drone footage.

Translation (2): Видеозапись с робота (увеличение).

Panel 2: Final close-up view of Eliza. Only her head now protrudes from the feeding siphon.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICATING RECOVERED SPEECH (3): …bye-bye…

Translation (3): …прощайте…

SUBTITLE (4): Magnified and enhanced drone footage.

Translation (4): Видеозапись с робота (увеличение).

Panel 3: Eliza’s head had just been sucked into the feeding siphon. A largish bubble has erupted forth from the siphon’s end.

SFX – BUBBLE EMERGING AS ELIZA DISAPPEARS (5): Bloop!

Translation (5): Буль-буль!

SUBTITLE (6): Magnified and enhanced drone footage.

Translation (6): Видеозапись с робота (увеличение).

Panel 4: A panel shaded from light to dark top to bottom (indicating light being filtered out as the ocean gets deeper). At the very bottom of the panel we can see the creature’s feeding siphon protruding.

SUBTITLE (7): Recovered drone footage.

Translation (7): Видеозапись с робота.


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MONTAGE – SWAT TEAM ARRIVES


– A caravan of police vehicles, including the SWAT van and many police cars blasts down a main street in the night, lights flashing ans sirens blaring.


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Приманка 053

лиза глубоко погружается в секс со щупальцами, а вскоре и в самого монстра.

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PAGE 53 (Four pages)

Panel 1: Close up of Eliza’s legs being pulled apart and another large, fat, penile tentacle snaking up between them.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICATED RECOVERED SPEECH (1): …zzschfwee…yeth…yeth…fug meeee…stk…

Translation (1): …ззшфввв…да…да…драхни меняя…тшш…

SUBTITLE (2): Magnified and enhanced drone footage.

Translation (2): Видеозапись с робота (увеличение).

Panel 2: View drawn back showing Eliza in the midst of a writing mass of tentacles coming in from out of the frame. At the lower right of the frame, the creature’s siphon appears.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICTING RECOVERED SPEECH (3): …YETH…UETH…YETH..FWWW yes yes yes yes…

Translation (3): …ДАА…ДАА…ДАА..ФВВВ да да да да…

SUBTITLE (4): Recovered drone footage.

Translation (4): Видеозапись с робота.

Panel 3: Same view, with the feeding siphon now extended so that Eliza’s feet are beginning to be sucked into it.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICATING RECOVERED SPEECH (5): …YETH…OH EAT ME PLEASE…YES…ZZT

Translation (5): …ДАА…СЪЕШЬ МЕНЯ…ДА…ЗЗТ

SUBTITLE (6): Recovered drone footage.

Translation (6): Видеозапись с робота.

Panel 4: Same view. Eliza is not about half-sucked into the feeding siphon. Many of the tentacles have retreated from her body so as not to get sucked in with her.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICATING RECOVERED SPEECH (7): …feels so good going into you…zztt pop!…

Translation (7): …так хорошо войти в тебя…ззтт щелк!…

SUBTITLE (8): Recovered drone footage.

Translation (8): Видеозапись с робота.


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MONTAGE – SWAT TEAM ARRIVES


– Inside the van, officers pull on body armor, load and check automatic weapons. The body armor includes helmet with shields that obscure the faces of the officers.


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So Proudly We Explode

The Movie

I was feeling unusually patriotic last night for some reason, and so I decided to watch something a little different from the usual collection of body horror, film noir, and dark comedy that make up most of my evening cinematic diversions.


DVD box cover art to So Proudly We Hail (1943).

So Proudly We Hail came out 1943, about eighteen months after the events it supposedly depicts. Its female leads Claudette Colbert (1903-1996), Paulette Goddard (1910-1990), and Veronica Lake (1922-1973) were among the Hollywood’s brightest stars in 1943. The movie was produced by Paramount Pictures, one of the bigs and it shows in high production values with large sets and a huge cast. And just like the box says, the movie did get four Academy Award nominations: Best Supporting Actress (for Goddard), Best Cinematography, Best Visual Effects, and Best Original Screenplay.


So this movie was big deal in 1943. And it deserves to be: it was exceptional American war propaganda, quite skillfully representing its American protagonists as humane, decent, and courageous while representing their Japanese antagonists (never really seen except in shadows or as taunting radio voices) as thoroughly vile, the sort of people that would bomb and strafe a clearly-marked hospital (which they actually do in the course of the movie). It’s a tear-jerker but with bit of Hollywood uplift in the ending.


As such, it might be a bit surprising that the movie isn’t better known than it is, but I think I might know why. You see, there’s this scene right at the halfway point of the movie.


The scene

It is 1942. The American Army and its Filipino allies are getting their collective asses kicked by the Japanese down the Bataan peninsula. A group of nurses under the command of Lt. Janet ‘Davy’ Davidson are under orders to evacuate with the rest of their field hospital, together with a group of sick and wounded Filipino children under their care. Unluckily for them their group is one of the last out. A squad of Japanese soldiers infiltrates the hospital grounds and kills the two soldiers assigned to drive their truck out. The nurses and children huddle in a shack in the dark, clearly terrified. One recalls (rather loudly) what Japanese soldiers did to women in Nanjing in 1937. Colbert throws one of the dead soldiers’ grenades away from the shack as a distraction and makes for the truck, only to discover that she doesn’t have the ignition keys.


At this point Lt. Olivia D’Arcy (Lake) takes a grenade of her own. There is a brief conversation in which Lake tells Colbert “It’s one of us or all of us.”


Veronica Lake in So Proudly We Hail (1943).  "it's one of us or all of us."

And in spite of Colbert’s horrified protests that Lake shouldn’t do what it is obvious that she is going to do, Lake walks out, pulls the pin out of the grenade and tucks it into her brassiere.


Veronica Lake tucks a grenade into her brassiere in  So Proudly We Hail (1943).

Lake walks out with her hands raised in apparent surrender.


Veronica Lake appears to surrender to the Japanese in So Proudly We Hail (1943).

She is promptly surrounded by Japanese infantrymen and…


Veronica Lake in So Proudly We Hail (1943).

KABOOM!


Veronica Lake explodes in So Proudly We Hail (1943).

The consequence of the scene

I don’t know how the scene was received in September 1943 when So Proudly We Hail was released, but it’s pretty clear that we are meant to see Lake as a heroine here. By about a year later, though, this coding would have to be forgotten when the Japanese began kamikaze attacks on Allied warships. Paul Fussell (1924-2012), one America’s most perceptive writers on war, noted something similar happening to an earlier war myth:


Widely believed in the dark days of 1942, when America required relief after all the narratives about surrenders and sinkings and retreats, was the story of Air Corps Captain Colin P. Kelly. He is said to have immolated himself in the early days of the war by dropping a bomb, with the customary early-in-the-war precision, down the main stack of the Japanese battleship Haruna, and then, after ordering his crew to bail out, crashing his bomber into the foundering warship. (By the time of the kamikazes, this myth was forgotten, lest the kamikaze pilots be considered heroes rather than madmen.) Actually what Kelly damaged was not a battleship but a barely armed troop transport which did not sink, and he was killed not then but later, when a Japanese fighter jumped his plane. There is evidence he tried to bail out before anyone else but was carried down with the plane when his parachute caught on the escape door. (note omitted)1


And the need to stigmatize the vile enemy may help explain why this movie seems to have largely sunk out of sight,2, which I think is too bad, as not only does it deprive people of a chance to see how even history’s “good guys” use propaganda, but also a precedent for my own interest in self-sacrificing heroines. For those of you who don’t like the narrative arc that something like Auto-Icon is tending, what’s wrong with you? Self-sacrifice is a tradition with the imprimatur of patriotism! Are you anti-American, or something?


Notes

1Paul Fussell, Wartime: Understanding and Behavior in the Second World War. (New York and Oxford: Oxford University Press, 1989). Kindle electronic edition, Loc. 480. Back to main text.



2Not entirely, of course. The late Florence King makes a reference to this very scene in her memoir and in particular in her discussion of being a most unsociable elementary school student. (In this context a “watery mole” is another elementary school student and a “huggybear” is a schoolteacher or other adult authority figure who insists on King’s being more sociable than her temperament can tolerate.


My ineptness made me the last hired, first fired on the playground, and hence more than ever likely to be alone. Miss Tanner’s genial hounding continued so I conceived the idea of “takin an end for good” in jumprope. This way I could seem to be participating while remaining outside the fray. The girls who liked — yes liked –to jump rope hated having to take their turn at turning, so for a while I was popular in a windmillish sort of way. While I turned, I fantasized murdering watery moles and huggybears by walking into their midst with a hand grenade, concealed in my undershirt, like Veronica Lake blowing the Japs to bits with her loaded bra in So Proudly We Hail. It did not help. The thought of dying only made me feel worse.


See Florence King, Confessions of a Failed Southern Lady. (New York: St. Martin’s Press, 1990). p 73. Back to main text


Приманка 052

Чудовище быстро приближается к Элизе.

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PAGE 52 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Close-up view of Eliza’s right foot. A tentacle has wrapped itself around one of her ankles.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICATING RECOVERED SPEECH (1): ZZZ Oh I think its fssht pop

Translation (1): ЗЗЗ О, я думаю, это тшшш щелк<

SUBTITLE (2): Magnified and enhanced drone footage.

Translation (2): Видеозапись с робота (увеличение).

Panel 2: Tentacles now wrapped around both of Eliza’s legs.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICTING RECOVERED SPEECH (3): grrRRzzt yes get me fxzzshh take me tik

Translation (3) гррРРтшш да, бери меня тшшшш возьми меня

SUBITITLE (4): Recovered drone footage.

Translation (4): Видеозапись с робота.

Panel 3: Closer-in view, showing tentacles winding around Eliza’s midsection. One “sucker tentacle” has attached itself to her left nipple and another appears about to do so to her right one.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICATING RECOVERED SPEECH (5): yesszzt…suck me…skreeeee

Translation (5): дааа…соси меня…зззззз

SUBTITLE (6): Magnified and enhanced drone footage.

Translation (6): Видеозапись с робота (увеличение).

Panel 4: Close-in view of Eliza’s face. A fat tentacle has found its way into her mouth

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICATING RECOVERED SPEECH (7): …MLPMPH…

Translation (7): …МЛПМПХ…

SUBTITLE (8): Magnified and enhanced drone footage.

Translation (8): Видеозапись с робота (увеличение).


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MONTAGE – SWAT TEAM ARRIVES


– A police SWAT team musters inside a police station, then runs and jumps into a a SWAT van.


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Приманка 051

Красивая, обнаженная и спокойная в океане.

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PAGE 51 (Single panel page – color)

Single panel: Eliza assumes a position, vertical in the water, the sun shining down from the surface, the water blue around her, her arms outstretched, her hair streaming in the water, her eyes closed, her expression blissful.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICATING RECOVERED SPEECH (1): rrrzz…so peaceful and calm…pop!

Translation (1): тшшш… так тихо и спокойно… щелк!

SUBTITLE (2): Recovered drone footage.

Translation (2): Видеозапись с робота.


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INT. THE SECURITY ROOM – NIGHT

Sam returns to consciousness. With agonizing effort he pulls himself up on his console, taps in a number on a keypad, flips up a cover and then presses the red button underneath.


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Приманка 050

Голая Элиза делает свое судьбоносное погружение.

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PAGE 50 (Four panels)

Panel 1: View view of Eliza jack-knifing off the side of the RV Seagoon, seen from the point of view of a camera on the Seagoon.

Panel 2: A splash in the water off the side of the Seagoon where Eliza went in.

Panel 3: View of Eliza swimming through the water, viewed from a point below her.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICATING RECOVERED SPEECH (1): Fzzt Bzz supposed to swim out about a hundred yards or so.

Translation (1): Шшш Тшш Проплыть ярдов сто или около того.

SUBTITLE (2): Recovered drone footage.

Translation (2): Видеозапись с робота.

Panel 4: Eliza swimming downward, below the surface.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICATING RECOVERED SPEECH (3): crackle don’t even have to breathe…fantastic zzt

Translation (3): Шшшш даже не нужно дышать…фантастика тшш

SUBTITLE (4): Recovered drone footage.

Translation (4): Видеозапись с робота.


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