5 thoughts on “Minnow 035”

1. You have the speech balloons mixed up in the third panel.

2. The directions of the speech bubbles in panel 3 seem to be mixed up (from first to last, they are left right right and should be right left right)

3. Last panel. First two word balloons are reversed as to speaker.

   • Yep, the arrows are pointing to the wrong person.

     But is she really holding her breath or developing gills?

4. Should be fixed now.

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