Minnow 035 Agent One 07 Agent One 08 ↑ Typewriter icon link to screenplay. ↑ Minnow written by Iago Faustus, adapted and illustrated by Erosarts.
The directions of the speech bubbles in panel 3 seem to be mixed up (from first to last, they are left right right and should be right left right)
Yep, the arrows are pointing to the wrong person. But is she really holding her breath or developing gills?
You have the speech balloons mixed up in the third panel.
The directions of the speech bubbles in panel 3 seem to be mixed up (from first to last, they are left right right and should be right left right)
Last panel. First two word balloons are reversed as to speaker.
Yep, the arrows are pointing to the wrong person.
But is she really holding her breath or developing gills?
Should be fixed now.