Приманка 096

И вот приходит странное предложение.

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PAGE 96 (Two panels)

Panel 1: Chiba and three other Japanese aquarium girls (GIRL #1, GIRL #2, and GIRL #3) are sitting around a table eating lunch. Chiba is reading a letter.

CAPTION – PSEUDO-NARRATION (1): A few days later, Chiba receives a special-delivery letter.

Translation (1): Спустя несколько дней Чиба получила заказное письмо.

Chiba (2): 手紙には、とても裕福な寄付者が、観客1人の一度限りのとても特別なショーのお返しとして、海事センターに新館を提供すると書かれています。

Girl #1 (3): チバ、本当にはいと返事するつもりですか?

SUBTITLE – CHIBA (4): The letter says that a very wealthy donor will give the Marine Center a new wing in return for a very special, one-time-only show with an audience of one.

Translation (4): Ей пишут, что очень богатый спонсор построит новое крыло для Водного центра в обмен на очень необычное, разовое шоу с аудиторией из одного человека.

SUBTITLE – GIRL #1 (5): Chiba, are you really going to say yes?

Translation (5): Чиба, ты в самом деле хочешь согласиться?

Panel 2: Chiba, holding the letter to her breast and her eyes closed, looking very happy.

Chiba (6): はい。

Girl #2 (7): あなたには、本当にワクワクさせられま!

SUBTITLE – CHIBA (8): Yes.

Translation (8): Да.

SUBTITLE – GIRL #2 (9): We are so excited for you!

Translation (9): Мы так рады за тебя!


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Someone has a question.

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INT. A COLLEGE EXAMINATION ROOM – DAY


A STUDENT in the audience raises her hand. Professor Lee recognizes her.


PROFESSOR LEE


There is a question, yes?


STUDENT


Excuse me, but could fill me in on who the daughters of Leos were?


TOOZIE


Their names were Praxithea, Theopoe, and Eubule.


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Приманка 095

Какое удивительное проявление сострадания!

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PAGE 95 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Still being interviewed, Chiba is smiling, reaching out with her right index finger to touch the tip of a tentacle that is protruding above the surface of the water.

Unseen interviewer (out-of-panel balloon) (1): 本気で言っているとは思えません!

Chiba (2): どうしてですか?

SUBTITLE – INTERVIEWER (3): You can’t be serious!

Translation (3): Вы шутите!

SUBTITLE – CHIBA (4): Why not?

Translation (4): Почему же?

Panel 2: Chiba is standing up, pulling her tank-top off so that her arms and the inside of the top are lifted up over her head. She is braless underneath.

Unseen interviewer (out-of-panel balloon) (5): だって…

Chiba (6): 本当に単純なことです。

SUBTITLE – INTERVIEWER (7): But…

Translation (7): Но…

SUBTITLE – CHIBA (8): It is really very simple.

Translation (8): Это очень просто.

Panel 3: Chiba dropping her shorts. In the panel they are still around her ankles but she is now otherwise naked.

Chiba (9): 思いやりの心に従って行動できないのなら、我々は生きるに値しません。

SUBTITLE – CHIBA (10): If we cannot act on compassion, then we do not deserve to live.

Translation (10): Если мы не способны действовать из сострадания, мы не заслуживаем того, чтобы жить.

Panel 4: A column of water on the surface of the tank where Chiba has just jumped in.

SFX – CHIBA JUMPING IN (11): Splash!

Translation (11): Плюх!


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Toozie at her defense.

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INT. A COLLEGE EXAMINATION ROOM – DAY


Toozie’s honors thesis defense.


Toozie sits at a desk faces Professors Lee, MAZZINI, and ROSENBLUM at a table. Bound copies of Toozie’s honors thesis are on her desk and the professors’ table. All of Toozie and the three professors are quite formally dressed.


Arrayed behind Toozie are various friends and curious lookers-on. They include Chad, Miranda, and Sherman as well as other students. They are rather less formally dressed.


PROFESSOR LEE


Well, Miss Chen, we have certainly come a long way together.


(smiles)


Now clearly for a thesis of this quality there’s little doubt but that you will be taking away highest honors, but obviously it would scarcely be fair if my colleagues and I didn’t get at least one last volley at you before you go on to greater things.


There is a round of light laughter from the audience.


PROFESSOR LEE


I believe that Professor Mazzini has the first question here.


PROFESSOR MAZZINI


Thank you, Professor Lee. Miss Chen, I was wondering if you could expand a bit on your claim in Chapter Three that there are direct parallels between the trope of human sacrifice in classical civilization and that in twentieth-century America.


TOOZIE


Certainly, Professor Mazzini. I think it is important to note that when we speak of “the Greeks” especially we are talking about the civilization of fourth and fifth century Athens. This is a civilization that was sophisticated, wealthy, urban, culturally and intellectually advanced. Much like ours. And much like ours, it did not make an explicit practice of human sacrifice. But they were clearly very interested in human sacrifice as a cultural trope.


PROFESSOR MAZZINI


Iphigenia, for instance.


TOOZIE


Iphigenia is probably the best known example. Another well-known one was the youths and maidens of Athens sent as sacrifices to the Minotaur. Other sacrifices, such as the sacrifice of the daughters of Leos are less well-known but very much on point and of significance to the Athenians: Demosthenes, for example, prominently mentions the sacrifice of the daughters of Leos in his Funeral Oration.


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Приманка 094

Чиба жалеет бедного голодного монстра.

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PAGE 94 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Close-up of Chiba’s bare legs dangling in the tank.

CAPTION – CHIBA NARRATING (1): 何ヶ月もずっと彼の近くにいると、彼の気持ちがわかってくるのです。

SUBTITLE – TRANSLATION (2): Having been close to him for all these months, I feel that I can feel what he feels.

Translation (2): Находясь рядом с ним все эти месяцы, я чувствую, что начинаю ощущать то же, что и он.

Panel 2: Chiba’s legs in the tank again. A tentacle has come up and is playing among her toes.

CAPTION – CHIBA NARRATING (4): 彼は悲しい、とてもお腹が空いたと思っています。私のことを食い尽くしたいと思っているのです。

SUBTITLE – TRANSLATION (5): And what he feels is sad and very hungry. He wants to eat me so very badly.

Translation (5): И он чувствует себя печальным и очень голодным. Ему так хочется съесть меня!

Panel 3: Same as Panel 2, except that now the tentacle has wrapped around her ankle.

CAPTION – CHIBA NARRATING (6): 彼には本当に申し訳なく思っています。

SUBTITLE – TRANSLATION (7): I feel so sorry for him.

Translation (7): Мне так жалко его!

Panel 4: Same as Panel 3, except that here the tentacle was wrapped around a little way up Chiba’s leg.

CAPTION – CHIBA NARRATING (8): 彼に自分を食べさせてやりたい、もし許されるなら、彼に食べてもらいたいと思います。

SUBTITLE – TRANSLATION (9): I would let him eat me, if they would let me let him eat me.

Translation (9): Я бы дала ему себя съесть, если б мне позволили это сделать.


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INT. A TABLE IN THE COLLEGE LIBRARY – DAY


Toozie is watching the Mediatrix’s news conference on her phone, listening in on earbuds. She replays the last exchange between the Mediatrix and Reporter #3, then writes something in a notebook.


Toozie looks something up in an old English-Greek lexicon, then writes more on her notebook page.


On the page, there are various notes on “theme of sacrifice,” a sketch of a tentacle monster, and then the end of Toozie’s phrase completing the words “house of Galen” = οἶκος Γαληνόυ = oikos galenou.


Toozie stares at the notebook for a moment.


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Приманка 093

На чудовище надет ошейник; ему не удастся снова поедать девушек.

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PAGE 93 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Another interview segment. Here Chiba sits on the lip of the tank. She has changed from her white swimsuit to a tank-top and shorts. She is dangling her bare feet in the tank’s water.

Unseen interviewer (out-of-panel balloon) (1): 食べられないかと、怖くなりませんか?

Chiba (2): いいえ、その対策はされています。

SUBTITLE – INTERVIEWER (3): You’re not afraid of being eaten?

Translation (3): Не боитесь вы быть съеденной?

SUBTITLE – CHIBA (4): No, they’ve taken care of that.

Translation (4): Нет, об этом тут заботятся.

Panel 2: An underwater robot, with grabbers, two holding on to the Creature’s feeding siphon and another pair holding some sort of giant cuff-ring.

CAPTION – CHIBA NARRATING (5): 何ヶ月もずっと彼の近くにいると、彼の気持ちがわかってくるのです。

CAPTION – CHIBA TRANSLATION (6): They put some sort of collar on his feeding siphon. No more girls for him.

Translation (6): На его питательный сифон надевают что-то вроде ошейника. Больше девушек он не получит.

Panel 3: Chiba being interviewed.

Unseen interviewer (out-of-panel balloon) (7): それは安心ですね。

Chiba (8): 実際には、悲しい気持ちになります。

SUBTITLE – INTERVIEWER (9): That must make you feel relieved.

Translation (9): Значит, вы чувствуете себя комфортно.

SUBTITLE – CHIBA (10): Actually, it makes me feel sad.

Translation (10): По правде сказать, это вызывает у меня грусть.


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INT. A TABLE IN THE COLLEGE LIBRARY – DAY

Toozie is watching the Mediatrix’s news conference on her phone, listening in on earbuds. She replays the last exchange between the Mediatrix and Reporter #3, then writes something in a notebook.


Toozie looks something up in an old English-Greek lexicon, then writes more on her notebook page.


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Приманка 092

Секс с монстром вдохновляет Чибу.

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PAGE 92 (Single panel page – color)

Single panel: Chiba, all tentacled up in the tank, her eyes closed and her head tilted back in ecstasy.

CAPTION – CHIBA NARRATING (1): 私からは観客が見えないので、例えプライベートなものでなくても、そんな風に感じます。それにセックスは本当に最高です。男性のことなど、ほとんど忘れてしまっていました。

SUBTITLE (2): I can’t see the audience, so it feels private even if it isn’t. And the sex is truly amazing. I’ve almost forgotten about men.

Translation (2): Я не вижу аудиторию, поэтому мне кажется, что я одна, хотя это не так. Это секс просто фантастичен. Я почти забыла о мужчинах.


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INT. TOOZIE’S DORMITORY ROOM – NIGHT


Toozie is back on her bed, surfing for porn on her laptop again.


At the top of the screen are the words “Browsing via anonymized proxy server.” She types into the URL bar VOREKINGDOM.SITE


More flipping through vore images until she stops on one in particular.


Toozie’s face is one of intent concentration.


On the screen is a high-resolution photograph. It is a reverse angle of the moment when SWAT Officer #2 muttered “Jesus, Mary, and Joseph” at the scene of the terrorist attack.


SWAT Officer #2 is visible in the background of the photo, as are the legs of the Sacrifice vanishing into the feeding siphon of the Gynophage.


Toozie downloads the photograph, opens a terminal window on her computer and types in “search photo metadata.”


A time and a set of GPS coordinates appear on the screen.


Toozie types in “locate coordinates.”


A map appears on the screen. In the center of the map is a building labeled OIKOS GALENOU.


TOOZIE


(to herself)


Great Cthulhu.


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