Приманка 091

Здесь есть некоторые специальные шоу.

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PAGE 91 (Four panels)

Panel 1: More interview position. Chiba looks a bit more serious.

Unseen interviewer (out-of-panel balloon) (1): あなたがやったこのようなショーは、あなたが唯一担当しているものですか?

Chiba (2): いいえ、他にもあります。

SUBTITLE – INTERVIEWER (3): Are shows like the one you just did the only ones you do?

Translation (3): У вас проводятся только шоу типа того, которое мы только что видели?

SUBTITLE – CHIBA (4): No, there are others.

Translation (4): Нет, есть и другие.

Panel 2: Chiba in the tank again. Two of the creatures tentacles are pulling down the straps of her one-piece swimsuit. Chiba is not resisting this action.

CAPTION – CHIBA NARRATING (5): 時々、海事センターの一般客向けの公開が終わった後に…

SUBTITLE (6): Sometimes, after the Marine Center closes to the general public…

Translation (6): Иногда, после того как Водный центр закрывается для посетителей…

Panel 3: Chiba now naked in the tank, a sucker tentacle attached to one of her nipples, her arms and legs snaked around with tentacles. Her eyes are open wide and she is looking down as if in wonder at the tentacle on her breast.

CAPTION – CHIBA NARRATING (7): ..裕福な寄付者のために、非常に特別なショーを行うことがあります。

SUBTITLE (8): …we put on some very special shows for wealthy donors.

Translation (8): …мы проводим очень необычные шоу для богатых спонсоров.

Panel 4: A couple of middle-aged to old rich Texas dudes staring in amazement, their faces illuminated by light from the tank, the background otherwise dark.

CAPTION – CHIBA NARRATING (9): この特別なショーのために、巨額のお金を支払う人もいます。

SUBTITLE (10): Some people pay huge amounts for these special shows.

Translation (10): Некоторые готовы платить огромные деньги за эти шоу.


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INT. TOOZIE’S DORMITORY ROOM – NIGHT


Toozie is back on her bed, surfing for porn on her laptop again.


At the top of the screen are the words “Browsing via anonymized proxy server.” She types into the URL bar VOREKINGDOM.SITE


More flipping through vore images until she stops on one in particular.


Toozie’s face is one of intent concentration.


On the screen is a high-resolution photograph. It is a reverse angle of the moment when SWAT Officer #2 muttered “Jesus, Mary, and Joseph” at the scene of the terrorist attack.


SWAT Officer #2 is visible in the background of the photo, as are the legs of the Sacrifice vanishing into the feeding siphon of the Gynophage.


Toozie downloads the photograph, opens a terminal window on her computer and types in “search photo metadata.”


A time and a set of GPS coordinates appear on the screen.


Toozie types in “locate coordinates.”


Please do not reproduce this storyboard or its associated screenplay text without permission from Faustus, who may be contacted here.

Приманка 090

Чиба Моэ рассказывает о своей работе.

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PAGE 90 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Chiba, standing at the top of the tank, quite wet still in her one-piece bathing suit, being interviewed.

Chiba (1): 私は海事センターでショーを演じるために、私の県出身の別の若い女性と一緒に雇われました。

SUBTITLE (2): I was hired along with other young women from my prefecture to put on shows at the Maritime Center.

Translation (2): Меня наняли вместе с другими молодыми женщинами для проведения шоу в Водном центре.

CAPTION (3): Chiba Moe, Marine Center show worker.

Translation (3): Чиба Моэ, организатор шоу Водного центра.

Panel 2: Incorporated photograph from http://www.erosblog.com/2008/12/16/nude-pearl-diver/

CAPTION – CHIBA NARRATING (4): 私たちはみな、海女 (真珠貝を採る女性潜水士) の村の出身なので、水中で働く素晴らしい伝統があります。

SUBTITLE (5): We are all from villages of ama (women pearl divers), so we have a great tradition of working underwater.

Translation (5): Мы все родом из деревней ама (женщин-ловцов жемчуга), так что у нас за плечами долгая традиция работы под водой.

Panel 3: “Still photograph” of a group of other divers, also attractive young Japanese women in swimsuits just like Chiba’s, standing at the base of the tank and posed in a group. All are smiling, and one has raised her hand in a “V” sign.

CAPTION – CHIBA NARRATING (6): 私たちのグループがあり、餌やりショーを行うために、一緒に働いています。とても人気です。

SUBTITLE (7): There is a group of us. We work together to put on feeding shows. They’re very popular.

Translation (7): Нас здесь целая группа. Мы работаем вместе в шоу с кормлением животных. Они очень популярны.

Panel 4: Back to the interview. Chiba is grinning.

Chiba (8): 私は本当に自分の仕事が好きです。

SUBTITLE (9): I really like my job.

Translation (9): Я очень люблю мою работу.


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INT. TOOZIE’S DORMITORY ROOM – NIGHT


Toozie is back on her bed, surfing for porn on her laptop again.


At the top of the screen are the words “Browsing via anonymized proxy server.” She types into the URL bar VOREKINGDOM.SITE


More flipping through vore images until she stops on one in particular.


Toozie’s face is one of intent concentration.


On the screen is a high-resolution photograph. It is a reverse angle of the moment when SWAT Officer #2 muttered “Jesus, Mary, and Joseph” at the scene of the terrorist attack.


SWAT Officer #2 is visible in the background of the photo, as are the legs of the Sacrifice vanishing into the feeding siphon of the Gynophage.


Please do not reproduce this storyboard or its associated screenplay text without permission from Faustus, who may be contacted here.

Приманка 089

Любой придет в восторг от этого шоу.

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PAGE 89 (Three panels)

Panel 1: Chiba wagging her finger at the retreating tentacle (indicate both with motion lines).

Panel 2: Chiba taking a “bow” underwater to her audience.

Panel 3: Probably the bottom half of the page – wide view of the Cub Scouts now on their feat and applauding.

SFX – APPLAUSE (1): CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP…

Translation (1): ХЛОП ХЛОП ХЛОП ХЛОП…


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Grindbin Appearance: The Pumaman

There is a story about actor Donald Pleasance — best known perhaps as “Dr. Loomis” in the Halloween movies — that he would never turn down a role. I don’t know if that’s true or not, but his appearance as the villain in Grindbin watch of The Pumaman (1980), a “super”-hero movie that for the most part deserves its obscurity, seem like strong confirmatory evidence of the story’s truth. Like so many movies of its ilk, The Pumaman made it onto the Grindbin podcast, and I appeared. Mike, Bobby, and Michael Tanner all make funny jokes while I mostly spend two hours fuming about how the damn writers didn’t do any damn research. Or that’s how I remember it anyway. We recorded it sort of late. You can download or listen to the episode here or subscribe to the Grindbin Podcast using your podcast app of choice.

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INT. TOOZIE’S DORMITORY ROOM – NIGHT


Toozie is back on her bed, surfing for porn on her laptop again.


At the top of the screen are the words “Browsing via anonymized proxy server.” She types into the URL bar VOREKINGDOM.SITE


More flipping through vore images until she stops on one in particular.


Toozie’s face is one of intent concentration.


Please do not reproduce this storyboard or its associated screenplay text without permission from Faustus, who may be contacted here.

Приманка 088

Симпатичная девушка, похоже, хорошо научилась управляться с чудовищем.

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PAGE 88 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Chiba underwater in the tank. She is swimming upright and has taken a fish out of the bag tied to her belt, which she is holding in her hand. One of the creature’s tentacles is extending toward her.

Panel 2: One of the tentacles is wrapped around the fish. The other has grabbed onto one of the shoulder straps of Chiba’s suit and is pulling it down.

Panel 3: The Cub Scouts again, who are staring at this scene gap-mouthed and obviously very interested in what will happen next.

Panel 4: Chiba using her free hand to swat at the tentacles aiming at molesting her. Her shoulder strep is down around her upper arm.


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INT. TOOZIE’S DORMITORY ROOM – NIGHT


Toozie is back on her bed, surfing for porn on her laptop again.


At the top of the screen are the words “Browsing via anonymized proxy server.” She types into the URL bar VOREKINGDOM.SITE


More flipping through vore images until she stops on one in particular.


Please do not reproduce this storyboard or its associated screenplay text without permission from Faustus, who may be contacted here.

Приманка 087

Симпатичная девушка ставит шоу.

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PAGE 87 (Four panels)

Panel 1: CHIBA MOE (“Chiba”), a very attractive young Japanese woman wearing a white one-piece swimsuit that has a logo for the Marine Center above the left breast stands on a diving board in position to make a dive. The swimsuit, while a one-piece, seems designed to emphasize some sex appeal, especially cleavage. Around Chiba’s waist there is a belt with a bag of sorts attached. The diving board extends over the tank containing the creature.

CAPTION (1): At Energexecon Center, a few years later.

Translation (1): Центр Energexecon, несколько лет спустя.

Panel 2: Chiba going into the water, her legs and lower half still out as she is in mid-dive.

SFX – DIVE (2): Splash!

Translation (2): Плюх!

Panel 3: A group of Cub Scouts in uniform, sitting cross-legged on the floor of the Center outside the pool. They are looking up, fascinated.

Panel 4: Chiba descending into the tank on her dive, underwater and surrounded by bubbles.


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