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PAGE 21 (Single panel page)

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Single panel: View into the water. We see Phoebe underwater, naked and surrounded by a roiling mass of tentacles, some of which appear to be penetrating all of her primary orifices. “Voices” can be heard suggesting the chaos on the Yellow Rose.

CAPTIONS AT VARIOUS POINTS AROUND THE PANEL (1): “Oh God, oh God!” “Kill that thing!” “Get it!” “Yes, Mr. Petrobux!” “I’m getting my gun!”

Translation (1): “¡Ay, Dios mío, ay, Dios mío!”. “¡Mátame esa cosa!”. “¡Mátala!”. “¡Sí, señor Petrobux!”. “¡Voy por mi arma!”.

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PAGE 20 (Single panel page)

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Single panel: Wide “shot” showing a certain amount of pandemonium on deck. Barron Sr. and Peony are leaning over the rail, looking horrified at what they see in the water. A little further on, YACHT CREWMAN #1, an African-American man and YACHT CREWMAN #2, a Latino man, both neatly attired in pseudo-naval uniforms, are lowering themselves in a boat over the side as part of a rescue attempt.

Peony (1): My baby! My baby!

Translation (1): ¡Mi bebé! ¡Mi bebé!

Barron Sr. (2): God dammit!

Translation (2): ¡Maldita sea!

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PAGE 19 (Four panels)

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Panel 1: Another, smaller column of water on the surface of the sea as Phoebe is jerked back underwater.

SFX – SUBMERGING (1): Fwoosh!

Translation (1): ¡Foosh!

Panel 2: A tentacle has emerged above the same surface of the water as in Panel 1. It is swinging around Phoebe’s bikini top, which the beast below has presumable stripped off her. (Indicate with motion lines.)

Panel 3: A spot on the deck of the Yellow Rose, close-up. Phoebe’s bikini top landing on the deck, presumably tossed there by the beast below.

SFX – WET BIKINI TOP LANDING ON DECK (2): Splut!

Translation (2): ¡Plic!

Panel 4: Same as Panel 2, but now it’s the bikini bottom landing next to the top.

SFX – WET BIKINI BOTTOM LANDING (3): Plop!

Translation (3): ¡Plop!

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