Logaĵo — 24-a paĝo

Kapitano MacMurdie klarigas eraron faritan de la Mararmeo.

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PAGE 24 (Four panels)

Panel 1: CARSON MACMURDIE (“MacMurdie”) an elderly but dignified-looking man (a retired U.S. Navy officer) in an interview pose.

MacMurdie (1): Well, it was a fuckup, that’s what it was.

Translation (1): Nu, tio estis granda kaĉo, ja ĝi estis.

SUBTITLE – IDENTIFIER (2): Capt. Carson MacMurdie, USN, Ret.

Translation (2): Kapitano MacMurdie, Usona Mararmeo, emerita

Panel 2: A photograph of two U.S. Navy officers in Second World War-era uniforms surveying a table of maps, documents, photographs.

CAPTION – MACMURDIE NARRATING (3): There was an investigation into the disappearance of those nurses in 1943, but its conclusion was too weird and disturbing to be circulated. So the report was classified top secret and the area simply closed off.

Translation (3): Estis enketo pri la malapero de tiuj flegistinoj en 1943, sed la konkludo estis tro stranga kaj perturba por diskonigo. Tial la raporto ricevis klasifon plejsekretan kaj la areo estis simple fermita.

Panel 3: External view of a large warehouse.

CAPTION – MACMURDIE NARRATING (4): By thirty-eight years later, everyone had forgotten why the area was closed, and the report was buried deep in some Navy archive. Anyone connected with the investigation had died or moved on. Nobody bothered to go back to the records and check.

Translation (4): Tridek ok jarojn poste, ĉiuj forgesis kial la areo estis fermita kaj la raporto enfosiĝis en iu mararmea arĥivejo. Ĉiu ligita al la enketo jam mortis aŭ transloĝiĝis. Neniu okupiĝs pri la kontrolado de arĥivoj.

Panel 4: MacMurdie in interview pose again.

MacMurdie (5): So when Mr. Rich and Powerful showed up and said he wanted to yacht in those waters, the Navy just replied “Yes, sir” and gave him a permit.

Translation (5): Kiam S-ro Riĉa-kaj-Ĉiopova aperis kaj diris, ke li volas jaĥti en tiuj akvoj, la Mararmeo simple respondis “Jes, sinjoro” kaj donis al li permeson.

MacMurdie (6): Too bad about the poor girl…

Translation (6): Domaĝe por la kompatinda knabino…


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INT. THE CATWALK OVER THE WAREHOUSE SPACE – DAY


Harry and Toozie look down from the catwalk.


HARRY


I ask you these things because I want to be very sure.


TOOZIE


I understand.


HARRY


You realize that the story you’re writing might not have the ending you are planning on.


TOOZIE


Explain.


HARRY


We’ve only had two real…incidents with they Gynophage. There’s no guarantee that it won’t come back to us after your sacrifice with anything related to the Thanatos virus. For all we know, it might come back with an improved recipe for bean dip. Or with nothing at all.


TOOZIE


I have two responses for you.


HARRY


Sure.


TOOZIE


One is that at one life against hundreds of millions or even billions the odds would have to be very short before the risk is no longer one I am willing to take.


HARRY


And two?


TOOZIE


If we lose on this, then it wasn’t really a failure as I see it. It’s just that the story is a tragedy rather a heroic epic. But some of of the greatest stories people have ever told are tragedies.


Harry looks at Toozie for a moment with an expression that seems to alternate between admiration and disbelief. After a bit of this, he turns back and faces out over the warehouse space.


HARRY


All right then. But I would like for you to stand here for a moment and look down at that thing and think for a minute more what you’re putting yourself in for.


Toozie looks intently.


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Logaĵo — 23-a paĝo

Barron la Juna ŝajnas vere plezurigita de tio, kio okazis al lia fratino.

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PAGE 23 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Barron Sr. putting his hand on the barrel of an assault rifle that Wealth Friend is pointing at the sea, a gesture meant to stop him from shooting into the water.

Barron Sr. (1): No, you idiot.

Translation (1): Ne, stultulo!

Panel 2: A view into the boat, showing the now-charred corpses of Yacht Crewman #1 and Yacht Crewman #2.

Panel 3: A view of Peony, now standing some distance away on deck, her head buried in her hands in shock and grief.

Peony (2): No…

Translation (2): Ne…

Panel 4: A view downward, indicating that Barron Jr. is pointing his camera down but is still filming. (Note that he is about 11 years old at this time.) We see the swimming trunks he’s wearing, his legs and feet and beneath them the planking of the deck. We can also see through the fabric of his swimming trunks that he is having a marked erection.


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INT. A MEDICAL CONSULTING ROOM – DAY


There is a KNOCK at the consulting room door.


DR. MOORCOCK


Come in!


Harry enters. Toozie turns around and rises to meet him.


HARRY


I’m sorry to interrupt, Dr. Moorcock, but this is the first chance I’ve had to meet Ms. Chen.


Harry bows slightly to Toozie, who returns the bow.


HARRY


How do you do, Ms. Chen. I am Hari Lal.


TOOZIE


How do you do, Dr. Lal. I would just like to say…


(appears to collect thoughts for a moment)


…how grateful I am for this opportunity.


HARRY


You are grateful to us?


TOOZIE


Yes.


HARRY


Could you explain?


TOOZIE


If I do this thing and it works, it will be a great story, don’t you think?


HARRY


I don’t disagree, but…


TOOZIE


A hundred years from now people will remember who Toozie Chen was and they’ll tell my story.


HARRY


Interesting.


TOOZIE


Think of all the people who were my age a hundred years ago, Dr. Lal. Hundreds of millions of them, all of them now dead. How many of their stories are still told?


HARRY


Would you come on a walk with me, Ms. Chen?


TOOZIE


Sure.


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Logaĵo — 22-a paĝo

Lasta spirospasmo por Febo.

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PAGE 22 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Yacht Crewman #1 and Yacht Crewman #2 in the boat by the side of the Yellow Rose, as if viewed through Barron Jr.’s camera. Yacht Crewman #1 has a harpoon raised and aimed, presumably at the tentacle beast. One small tentacle is reaching over the side of the boat. Yacht Crewman #2 is sitting in the back of the boat steering an outboard motor.

Yacht Crewman #1 (1): I’ll get you, you motherfucker!

Translation (1): Mi trafos vin, patrinfikulo!

Panel 2: Yacht Crewman #1 and Yacht Crewman #2 appear as blackened silhouettes as some sort of massive electrical discharge hits their boat. The whole craft is surrounded by a flash as if of lightning.

SFX – BOAT AND CREW BEING ELECTRO-FRIED (2): KZZZ-ZOT!

Translation (2): KZZZ-ZOT!

Panel 3: Phoebe’s head resurfaces just a bit. A tentacle covers a triangular region around her mother and nose, rather like a medical breathing mask. Her eyes are closed, and her expression looks almost blissful.

Panel 4: Ripples in the region of water where Phoebe’s head has been pulled underneath for one last time.


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Naked young man?  Meh.

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WAREHOUSE SPACE – ANOTHER TIME


TOOZIE (V.O.)


And what about male nudity?


A handsome NAKED YOUNG MAN faces the tentacles, which circle him with only mild interest and do not attempt to touch him.


DR. MOORCOCK (V.O.)


Doesn’t appear to have any effect.


BACK TO SCENE


DR. MOORCOCK


(taking Toozie’s hand and patting it)


We promise to make things as dignified as we can.


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Logaĵo — 21-a paĝo

Febon molestas la tentakla monstro.

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PAGE 21 (Single panel page)

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Single panel: View into the water. We see Phoebe underwater, naked and surrounded by a roiling mass of tentacles, some of which appear to be penetrating all of her primary orifices. “Voices” can be heard suggesting the chaos on the Yellow Rose.

CAPTIONS AT VARIOUS POINTS AROUND THE PANEL (1): “Oh God, oh God!” “Kill that thing!” “Get it!” “Yes, Mr. Petrobux!” “I’m getting my gun!”

Translation (1): “Ho Dio, ho Dio!” “Mortigu tion!” “Trafu ĝin!” “Jes, S-ro Petrobux!” “Mi prenos mian pafilon!”


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Bloodybits Podcast appearance: The Fly


It is with great pleasure that I can announce my appearance with Eddie the Axe and Tim Yobo discussing David Cronenberg’s The Fly (1986). If you’re a really long-time reader of this site, you’ll know that this movie has been a fave of mine for just about always, and we had a grand old time discussing it.


You can get this episode of The Bloodybits Podcast via this page at Eddie’s site or simply by searching for “Bloodybits” on your podcast app of choice. And don’t forget that I’m serious about my swag offer at the end of the ‘cast. If you have a postal address you’re comfortable sharing, I’ll send you some swag.

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Naked woman?  Oh yeah!

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WAREHOUSE SPACE


DR. MOORCOCK (V.O.)


Female nudity appears to function as a trigger to its attempts at a feeding cycle.


The Volunteer drops her robe, leaving her nude.


Several tentacles rush toward the young woman, some grabbing her and pulling her toward the Gynophage. She CRIES OUT.


Two ASSISTANTS in Hazmat suits rush forward with Taser-like devices and shock several of the tentacles, which retreat.


The Assistants pick the Volunteer up by her arms and pull her back out of tentacle range.


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Logaĵo — 20-a paĝo

Paniko en la jaĥto!

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PAGE 20 (Single panel page)

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Single panel: Wide “shot” showing a certain amount of pandemonium on deck. Barron Sr. and Peony are leaning over the rail, looking horrified at what they see in the water. A little further on, YACHT CREWMAN #1, an African-American man and YACHT CREWMAN #2, a Latino man, both neatly attired in pseudo-naval uniforms, are lowering themselves in a boat over the side as part of a rescue attempt.

Peony (1): My baby! My baby!

Translation (1): Mia bebo! Mia bebo!

Barron Sr. (2): God dammit!

Translation (2): Damne, Dio!


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