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Приманка 064

Клаудия справедливо негодует.

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PAGE 64 (Four panels)

Panel 1: View of Claudia again, realization sinking in.

Claudia (1): No.

Translation (1): Нет.

Panel 2: Claudia in the act of standing up, her face enraged.

Claudia (2): No fucking way, do you understand?

Translation (2): Не выйдет, понятно?

Panel 3: Claudia in the midst of storming past Turpentine out of the room. Turpentine has reached out to grab her sleeve, and Claudia has a hand raised to swat it away.

Turpentine (3): Claudia, please.

Translation (3): Клаудия, пожалуйста.

Claudia (4): Let go of me!

Translation (4): Пустите меня!

Panel 4: View of Hiram, sitting back in his chair and rolling his eyes.

Hiram (5): Women!

Translation (5): Женщины!


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A tony car ride for Dr. Lal and his lawyer.

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EXT. A WASHINGTON DC STREET – DAY

A very high-end car drives along.


INT. CAR WITH DRIVER – DAY

Inside the car. The car has a uniformed driver. In the back seat, wearing business suits, are Harry and Arthur.


ARTHUR


I wouldn’t worry about this too much, Harry. They don’t want to crucify you.


HARRY


So why are they asking me out here? I’m just a doctor, not some sort of national security man.


ARTHUR


My guess is they want your cooperation with something.


EXT. OUTSIDE A GRAY-LOOKING FEDERAL BUILDING – DAY

The car signals left and pulls into a parking garage.


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Приманка 063

Кто-то всегда лелеет злые мысли о принесении в жертву кого-то другого.

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PAGE 63 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Back in the ship’s galley. Turpentine is sitting slumped in his chair, looking dejected.

Turpentine (1): The attempt with the second subject failed due to premature detonation.

Translation (1): Эксперимент со вторым объектом провалился из-за преждевременной детонации.

Turpentine (2): We must learn to accept this as scientists, with quiet dignity and grace…

Translation (2): Мы должны принять это как настоящие ученые, с достоинством…

Panel 2: Hiram, sitting with a scheming grin on his face.

Hiram (3): Actually, Professor, we have not failed yet.

Translation (3): Профессор, не все еще кончено.

Panel 3: Turpentine, looking in this panel like an idea has suddenly come into his head.

Turpentine (4): We have no more subjects.

Translation (4): У нас больше нет материала.

Turpentine (5): Although…

Translation (5): Хотя…

Panel 4: Claudia, looking a bit shocked again.

Claudia (6): Why is everyone looking at me all of a sudden?

Translation (6): Что вы все смотрите на меня?


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Приманка 062

Дафна взрывается в неподходящее время.

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PAGE 62 (Three panels. The first two should appear across the top of the page, the third a long panel across the bottom)

Panel 1: View of Daphne’s in the water, her midsection dominated by an explosive effect – BOOM! – as her capsule explodes.

SUBTITLE (1): Recovered drone footage.

Translation (1): Видеозапись с робота.

Panel 2: A large white sphere pops up on the surface of the ocean.

SFX – SPHERE SURFACING (2): Bloop!

Translation (2): Плюх!

SUBTITLE (3): Aerial drone surveillance footage.

Translation (3): Видеозапись с воздушного дрона.

Panel 3: A line of spectators along the rail of the RV Seagoon: Hiram, Turpentine, Claudia, and Captain Drummingdale. Hiram is stroking his chin with a “well, that’s interesting” look. Turpentine is facepalming. Claudia is registering shock. Drummingdale is leaning over the rail and retching.

SUBTITLE (4): Aerial drone surveillance footage.

Translation (4): Видеозапись с воздушного дрона.


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SWAT guy can't believe what he's seeing.

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INT. THE MAIN WAREHOUSE SPACE – NIGHT


SWAT Officer #2 removes his helmet. We see that he is an older man with short gray hair. His face registers something like horror.


SWAT OFFICER #2


Jesus, Mary, and Joseph.


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Приманка 061

Там, в воде, что-то идет не так.

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PAGE 61 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Daphne floating in the ocean.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICATING RECOVERED SPEECH (1): ZZT…here I am, out here wondering…rzznnn… what it will be like…kap-tik…

Translation (1): ЗЗТ…вот я и тут, думаю…рззннн… на что это будет похоже…кап-тик…

SUBTITLE (2): Recovered drone footage.

Translation (2): Видеозапись с робота.

Panel 2: Daphne floating in a slightly different position in the ocean.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICATING RECOVERED SPEECH (3): nrrg…shltz…for Eliza, it looked awesome…but…kirraza…just find it disgusting…sllzzz…

Translation (3): нррг…шлтц…Элиза считала это великолепным…но…тшшш…мне кажется это отвратительным…сллззз…

SUBTITLE (4): Recovered drone footage.

Translation (4): Видеозапись с робота.

Panel 3: Daphne floating in yet another position in the ocean.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICATING RECOVERED SPEECH (5): zzzltslx…gives me butterflies in my stomach…kkrrr…zot

Translation (5): зззлтслкс…щекочет в желудке…ккррр…ззт

SUBTITLE (6): Recovered drone footage.

Panel 4: Close-up on Daphne’s face, which suddenly appears contorted.

CAPTION – FUZZY BOX INDICATING RECOVERED SPEECH (7): …rrrg…hey, I don’t feel so good…blll

Translation (7): …рррг…мне нехорошо…пллл

SUBTITLE (8): Magnified and enhanced drone footage.

Translation (8): Видеозапись с робота (увеличение).


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The sacrifice makes a tasty meal.

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INT. THE MAIN WAREHOUSE SPACE – NIGHT


Several SWAT officers race to their three comrades to make sure they okay (they are). But one, SWAT OFFICER #2, stops, lowers his weapon and looks up at the Gynophage’s siphon.


The Gynophage has stuffed the Sacrifice into its siphon and is in the process of swallowing her. She has gone in head-first, so at first her bare legs, kicking slightly, are visible from her upper thighs to her feet.


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Приманка 060

Объятия и спуск.

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PAGE 60 (Four panels)

Panel 1: Claudia embraces Daphne as she sits on the rail of the RV Seagoon.

Claudia (1): Good luck, Daphne.

Translation (1): Удачи, Дафна.

Daphne (2): Thanks.

Translation (3): Спасибо.

Panel 2: Daphne sitting on the rail, fitting her swimmer’s goggles in place.

Panel 3: Daphne in the middle of her jump off the ship, heading toward the water feet-first.

Panel 4: View of Daphne from the drone’s P.O.V. below and behind her as she swims through the water.

SUBTITLE (3): Recovered drone footage.

Translation (3): Видеозапись с робота.


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INT. THE MAIN WAREHOUSE SPACE – NIGHT


Fred reaches into his backpack and withdraws a hand grenade. He pulls the pin and places it between his body and his electronics.


SWAT OFFICER #1


Take cover!


The three SWAT officers advancing on Fred hit the deck. The grenade explodes, shredding Fred and sending shattered electronic parts flying.


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